Amazing piece of work so far! Breathtaking detail, especially in the clothing. The flow of the drawing is great, allowing the eye to flow from person to person. Although it is magnificent, I do have some complaints. For one, I think you could brighten up the person all the way to the left's hair a bit more. I think you lost the look of hair a bit and its becoming a bit too dark. It's ok to have dimension in your drawing, but lighten up and make the lighting source a bit more obvious. Secondly, although Harry's face is gorgeous, his cheekbones are a bit too defined for him and its making him look a bit different than how he would usually look. And one thing... I could be wrong, but the guy all the way to his left, forgot his name, I apologize, his eyes are a bit different from each other, the right is higher than the left. Another than that, it's great, and keep up the good work, I enjoy seeing your artwork, and it's cool to see the masterpiece in the making.