natsu wip

I love your faces! You do a really good job on those. The detail/shading is excellent.

His whole arm is too small, especially the hand. Technically, since it's going into the background it's going to seem smaller, but the fist should be proportionate to the face since they are the same distance away from the front of the picture. Hands are as long as the face.

Visually- what is done is excellent
Originality- not your character so you are going off someone else's idea
Technique- you make it look very realistic
impact- its a sketch, but a very good one

You should really finish your pieces when asking for a critique. the right side is awesome, but the left side doesn't have much to talk about since it's not finished.