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I like the way you draw.
And the shade of her hair soooo detail and so brave
But I saw a strange thing in her right shoulder.
It's looks small and it's not balanced with her face/head.
Maybe you must make it little bigger.

Over all, I like it so much!!
Even though it's a simple draw, I'm inspired!
The expression of her face make my heart trembled.
You did a nice job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
This is my favorite one
Maybe someday you should make a draw in full colour and give it a nice background to make it perfect

Keep it up and keep improving.