I think that there's a very little problem of proportion with the body, maybe with the longer of the arms, and the legs.. I don't know, I haven't the draw in my hands so it's difficult to say and see that. The idea to draw it with white ink on black paper is great, it make it a little strange and a little lugubrious, very dark, for me (In more, there's no "wallpaper", it leaves an impression of large space, very interesting, we can guess there's what we imagine, a part of liberty for those who look, in this way you allow to the "lookers" to participate with you in your work. It's very pleasant !). The darkness are very good represented, you really have a good technique, maybe a little more dark in the neck.. just maybe. The perspective is very well represented
Sorry for m vey bad english but i'm french and even if "reverso" helps me, i hink i've did a lot of errors of grammar and conjugation ^^' or even vocabulary, brr ><
Anyway, continue in this way, with your personality and your talent, it's a very good work
The idea to draw it with white ink on black paper is great, it make it a little strange and a little lugubrious, very dark, for me (In more, there's no "wallpaper", it leaves an impression of large space, very interesting, we can guess there's what we imagine, a part of liberty for those who look, in this way you allow to the "lookers" to participate with you in your work. It's very pleasant !).
The darkness are very good represented, you really have a good technique, maybe a little more dark in the neck.. just maybe.
The perspective is very well represented
Sorry for m vey bad english but i'm french and even if "reverso" helps me, i hink i've did a lot of errors of grammar and conjugation ^^' or even vocabulary, brr ><
Anyway, continue in this way, with your personality and your talent, it's a very good work
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