I do agree that the attention grabbing element of this artwork is the flow in the hair. The correct use of highlights and Grayish tones; the end effect being not too contrasting and not otherwise, it is infact balanced in terms of contrast; giving the viewer a very realistic impression of hair. I do love the fact that how you experimented with folds and knots, and I do say that this will also serve as a great reference for other deviants out there who want to draw better hair. You have achieved volume with less pencil strokes. The only part that in my opionion only that would make it better is that if rather than leaving the ends of the hair with 'thick lines', why not make them fade away? ( as in lower the pressure on the pencil at the ends of the hair).
So concluding, I would say that this is infact a very beautiful piece of art, and I shall look forward to seeing more your art
I love the sense of flow in the hair. That alone gives it a wonderful sense of form. With that you've managed to capture the reality of the hair really nicely! I think a little bit more shading in some of them (mainly the ones on the left) would increase the realness of them; I would love to see more lost edges in them, I think it would really give mass to the hairstyles and shape of the head under them. However, I'm on the edge with my own opinion of that because I also love seeing exactly what's going on with the hairstyles, which I think may be your goal in the first place with them. Either which way you go they are really beautiful! Very nice work indeed
You have achieved volume with less pencil strokes.
The only part that in my opionion only that would make it better is that if rather than leaving the ends of the hair with 'thick lines', why not make them fade away? ( as in lower the pressure on the pencil at the ends of the hair).
So concluding, I would say that this is infact a very beautiful piece of art, and I shall look forward to seeing more your art
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